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We Changed What We Loved

We have opened each other up, inspected and judged, adjusted the unwanted to our better liking. We have tweaked and fenagled, all those foibles, picadilloes and perceived flaws, tried very hard to smooth-out all those rough edges. We are still working on one another. ever watchful for new defects and slipups, and have quite forgotten, who we were before we demanded perfection... that carefree, innocent time when an all-encompassing love accepted unquestionably, a broken past and a brave heart.

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