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We Break

breathing i say i'm breathing, i appear to be, but they do not see, they cannot ever aching i am not aching, i say that i'm not, and they do not see that i really am everyone feels the way i do. we hide everything, inside our heads and our hearts buliding it all just builds up until that crucial moment, when it snaps, and we break

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/2/2012 8:31:00 PM
Wonderful poem read today. Really we break, i agree.Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/12/2012 2:54:00 AM
JULI,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:07:00 PM
Very prophetic write Juli-Michelle. Nicely done
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on a great write and a terrific win. Jon
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Date: 2/8/2012 8:18:00 PM
thanks

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