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We Are the Same: My First Poem Ever

Open your heart, your soul, and your brain... Strive to be different, but never forget what makes us the same. Many will claim to disdain others for reasons they cannot control. Reasons such as color, belief, culture, language, and goals. Society will continue to fall if this remains! Fall like rain that softens and washes away the clay in which we are all made. All men and women are born with eyes, ears, arms, hands, fingers, lungs, legs, feet, and toes... These are all similarities that no one chose. We all have mouths, tongues, hearts, blood, bones, and a nose... So why does mankind continue to fade instead of grow? Let these words shiver your spines and corrupt your minds in which we all have! To claim or believe that you are better than any person is a crime! At the moment, mankind is covered in slime and filth! Preying on the weak with no means other than MEANINGLESS WEALTH! They do it in stealth and don't care at all about your health or well being! But there must be something else we're just not seeing. They've blinded us like sheep just searching for meaning. But inside every sheep ROARS the heart of a lion, gleaming and BEGGING to cry out in DEFIANCE! I am SICK of the violence and CAN NO LONGER HOLD my silence! I REFUSE to sit back and watch as humanity gets SLAIN! Life is more than just a silly game and fear SHOULD NOT be any ones claim! Don't continue to refrain from seeing the worlds pain, ACKNOWLEDGE IT! There are only three paths in this life, so be wise and pick a lane...

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Date: 7/18/2014 3:04:00 PM
Aziz, thank you for the thanks..Linda
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Date: 7/7/2014 7:59:00 PM
Aziz,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2014 6:07:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Aziz. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 6/26/2014 6:39:00 PM
Thank you everyone for your kind welcomes. I am an aspiring actor and am just looking for new ways to explore my creativity.
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Date: 6/25/2014 11:54:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Aziz :) - I choose your FIRST well written poem !!!!! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Aziz Ghrabat
Date: 6/26/2014 6:37:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 6/25/2014 10:41:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Aziz Ghrabat
Date: 6/26/2014 6:38:00 PM
Your welcome
Date: 6/25/2014 3:04:00 AM
Reality reflective write Aziz.. Thank God still there are persons here on earth who cares allot..:) Warm welcome to poetrysoup..:) I'm Olive :) I've been here 'bout two years and am having a great time..:) I hope you will as I am:) lots of beautiful persons here..:) GBU
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Aziz Ghrabat
Date: 6/26/2014 6:38:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 6/24/2014 9:29:00 PM
Aziz,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Aziz Ghrabat
Date: 6/26/2014 6:38:00 PM
Thank you

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