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We Daffodils

WE DAFFODILS We are the brightest best-loved first-borns of God’s flower children, Hear our golden trumpets’ clarion call. Our sunny mouths whisper With nodding heads.We chatter among ourselves like market women. Gladness-filled,we stand erect, the tallest, smartest, like serried soldiers. Our tender tips were cold in the snow; the smiling sun now warms our lips. Our swaying golden bells of heaven - of God’s orchestra the brass section - Playing to the overhead budding leaves and the slow-rising tulips. Hearty, open-mouthed, laughing at the sun to attract his warm affection. . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck 27 February 2012 Entered in Francine Roberts's contest "Pusywillows or daffodils"

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Date: 3/7/2012 6:37:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Francine's contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 1:44:00 PM
Wow! I love the way you give human life to the daffodils as they nod their heads and chatter. Awesome work, Syd. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2012 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning piece I would have placed it higher xx
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Date: 3/6/2012 12:16:00 AM
KC, you are on a roll; whoo!.. happy congrats on your stunning win :) huggs
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Date: 3/5/2012 11:58:00 PM
congrats on your 4th place win Syd, great job on the personification
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:19:00 PM
line 5 check for typo
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