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Way Back When I Was Ten

Way back when I was ten There was once my old good friend Her name sounds like a musical key Everyone called her Melody We’re young and wild to laugh things over Ran on grasses bringing bags and a clover Couldn’t quite forget the small talks in room Play hide and seek inside the classroom I found my best friend when I was ten Still remember our childhood days quite more often I wonder where the world Melody is hiding Years went by since I haven’t seen her face smiling Is there a chance to see her again? Hope we’ll see soon before Earth comes to an end Melody! Melody! Where are you now?! Searching for you way back ago till now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/20/2016 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations, Lei: I hope you find her.
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on this win! Enjoyed reading.
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:36:00 AM
Lei, Congratulations on your nice win. LINDA
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Date: 2/17/2016 8:30:00 AM
lei, big congrats on your win!..huggs
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Date: 2/16/2016 10:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lei. I haven't seen my high school friends in over 40 years. Thanks for sharing your memories and letting us into your life. Bless them and Peace:)
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Date: 2/16/2016 9:23:00 PM
I think we can all relate to your question and asking where are our old friends now... Congrats on a win with this great nostlagic poem! Thanks for entering, Lei :)
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Date: 1/30/2016 7:37:00 AM
this is a charming poem Lei - I have lost touch with so many people and I am sure you would love to get in touch with Melody .. that is where facebook or friends reunited comes in handy (but I don't do facebook):-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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