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Way Back Then When I Was Ten

Way back then when I was Ten There were times I recall before A year had passed to end the War Block parties ran the streets galore Depression weaned and life was fine No rationed food and free to dine Spinster teachers taught us well To learn life’s lessons and excel Coal was used to heat our home And collected as the week would pass We stayed close and never roamed Our world enclosed by one small street There were not many folks to meet A shy and awkward child was I Difficult to blend in well But only time would break the spell Then one day I began to pry In reading books and seek the lore Of travel and its scenes galore I accomplished all the dreams I sought On lessons learned and what it brought And recall the times I lived as a child Fight life when it’s fierce embrace it when mild But I’ll never forget to to remember when Way back then when I was ten

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Date: 2/25/2016 11:19:00 PM
Congratulations Ralph: Our childhood shapes us so much, and we often look back with nostalgia. Best, SuZ
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Date: 2/18/2016 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I enjoyed your trip back in time. Well done.
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:20:00 AM
Ralph, Congratulations on your nice win. LINDA
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Date: 2/17/2016 7:34:00 AM
charming verse at 10, ralph.. best of congrats!..huggs
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:37:00 AM
Those childhood memories are worth holding on to. Congratulations, Ralph.
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Date: 2/16/2016 9:38:00 PM
A wonderful story, Ralph. I'd be lovin some of those spinster teachers about now. LOL. Thanks for giving us a glimpse into your life and congratulations.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 2/17/2016 7:17:00 AM
THANK YOU, DANIEL FOR YOUR COMMENT.
Date: 2/16/2016 8:14:00 PM
Some truly wonderful memories you've shared and I enjoyed reading them, Ralph... Congrats on a win with this beautiful poem! Nicely written and rhymed! Thanks for entering, Ralph :)
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 2/17/2016 7:05:00 AM
Thank you , Kelly for your comment , much appreciated.
Date: 2/11/2016 8:51:00 AM
A wonder and a bliss, your lines have given my heart a kiss and I am glad on your page, I did not suffer a miss. An outright 7 dear colleague
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:05:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem Ralph. Sounds like you have had some exciting times.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 2/5/2016 2:46:00 PM
Hi Connie: I will always recall my days in South Philly.
Date: 1/31/2016 8:43:00 PM
I really like this one . When I was ten we lived on a farm, were poor and had very tough times but looking back now we had each other 11 children and we although quite poor had fun and lived happy. Great poem... A7
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Date: 1/29/2016 7:00:00 PM
wonderful memories in your rhyme good luck in the contest Ralph:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/30/2016 6:15:00 AM
Soup is pretty quiet at times Ralph I try and comment as widely as a can but some days I have little time to even write poems:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 1/29/2016 10:19:00 PM
Hi Jan: Thanks for being the first to comment as always.

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