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Way Back Then When I Was Ten

Way Back Then When I Was Ten Way back then when I was ten, I lived in Washington D.C. The White House, Capitol and Monument were truly sights to see. I remember taking a bus ride, downtown to see the parades, I would rush to find a seat on the curb, to watch the clowns’ charades. Way back then when I was ten, I was in the 5th grade, I joined the orchestra with my friends, the violin I played Then one day a Concert, in front of Classmates and the PTA. Nervous stomach, trembling hands, my fingers froze like clay. Way back then when I was ten, outside was so much fun, Games like tag and hide-and-seek kept me on the run. Hop scotch, jacks and Jump rope, required a little skill. But with daily practice, I soon became, Queen of the Hill. Memories of my childhood and days spent with family and kin Brings back thoughts of yesterdays, way back then, when I was ten. Written: © 1/27/16

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Date: 2/20/2016 9:07:00 AM
Hi Sarita: Congratulations on a memorable poem.
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/20/2016 9:44:00 AM
Thanks, Ralph!!
Date: 2/18/2016 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! So enjoyed reading this, remembering all the time we spent outside... Well done.
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/18/2016 12:00:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!!
Date: 2/17/2016 2:06:00 PM
ANYTIME
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:36:00 AM
Sarita, Congratulations on your nice win. LINDA
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/17/2016 1:01:00 PM
Thank you very much Linda!!
Date: 2/17/2016 6:03:00 AM
It's great to see my fellow poets as children. Well done and congrats, Sarita.
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/17/2016 8:22:00 AM
Good Morning Lin, my accomplishments are the result of my treasured memories!! Thanks for the congrats!!
Date: 2/16/2016 10:05:00 PM
And such beautiful memories they are, Congratulations on your win and bless your memories, Thanks for letting us share. Peace:) I played the trumpet.
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/16/2016 11:52:00 PM
Thanks for the congratulations, Daniel! Glad that you enjoyed my trip down memory lane. Feel free to stop by anytime!!
Date: 2/16/2016 9:11:00 PM
I joined my high school band and remember how nervous I was to play in front of a crowd also... Congrats on a win with this great nostalgic poem! Thanks for entering, Sarita :)
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Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/16/2016 11:58:00 PM
Much appreciation Kelly!! I had butterflies the whole way through!

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