Waxy Green

waxy green leaves shone frost's bitter bite turned them gold... ginko's gold 'pon ground

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/17/2013 12:34:00 AM

Sara, ha nice... fascinating colors... the waxy green gave it a go...xox..Linda

Kash Poet

Date: 11/15/2013 8:04:00 PM

Beautiful imagery here Sara.Love this haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2013 5:44:00 PM

I really liked the o assonance in this one, sweetie.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/15/2013 5:18:00 PM

- Beautiful image - well done Sara ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/15/2013 4:51:00 PM

This is a beautiful sight you have described here within your gorgeous poem! I surely loved reading this awesome write here this evening! What a fabulous painting you described with your words, Great Work!!

Ken Carroll

Date: 11/15/2013 2:42:00 PM

Hi Sara, Wonderful tribute to autumn! Ken