Waves

Last evening, Standing on the beach, Watching the waves making rhythmic beat. Suddenly it came with wide,white grin Tenderly touching and left again. Was about to leave, When it said- Hey gal, don't go too far. I will come back again. And There it was, with the wide,white grin. Waves so amazing.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 10:42:00 AM

mad Hu, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/22/2015 8:11:00 PM

mad Hu :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/8/2012 8:00:00 AM

Amazing write. Like waves, let your poems splash here. Tfs

Mad Hu
Date: 10/8/2012 9:17:00 PM

Thank you:)

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/15/2012 10:29:00 AM

Very well written Poem Mad hu. Your waves definitely created a rhythmic beat with the sound of splashing waves. Beautiful write. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Madhu

Mad Hu
Date: 9/17/2012 12:19:00 AM

thanks:)

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/5/2012 10:25:00 PM

Good idea to personify the ocean waves. Good write.

Mad Hu
Date: 9/6/2012 9:50:00 PM

Thanks:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/5/2012 8:14:00 AM

And like your waves, one indeed will keep coming back to your poetry. awesome.

Mad Hu
Date: 9/5/2012 9:23:00 PM

Thank you:)for your kind comments

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2012 3:42:00 AM

i feel the tender splash of your words, mad.. truly splendid as always!..:) huggs!

Mad Hu
Date: 9/4/2012 3:56:00 AM

Thank you for the kind comments:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2012 10:37:00 AM

I love this one, the waves personified. a great poem with a surprising feel to it!

Mad Hu
Date: 9/4/2012 3:56:00 AM

Thank you:)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/3/2012 6:54:00 AM

great write about the waves, they are beautiful. Thanks for stoping by. Lucilla

Mad Hu
Date: 9/4/2012 3:55:00 AM

Thank you too:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2012 4:54:00 AM

Watching the waves ..... I like it too.... A well written poem. - Xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

Mad Hu
Date: 9/4/2012 3:55:00 AM

:)THANK YOU

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/2/2012 11:27:00 PM

I so luv the beach and waves which crest to different shapes and designa like the fluid motion of your words luv .. most enjoyable creation Mad Hu ..

Mad Hu
Date: 9/3/2012 2:45:00 AM

Thank you:)