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Wave Ripples Little brittle ripples to dance propagate with flow of river. Me watching on stream strand in trance. Dry leaf falls on wave to shiver. Wave cradles as if care - giver. Leaf surrenders on whims of wave ! Hardly matters if shaky or brave. Being carried with river flow, leaf lying on wave has to behave as river directs, fast or slow. 02/25/ 23

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Date: 3/1/2023 9:55:00 AM
Such a profound message you have penned here Anisha!
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Date: 2/28/2023 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. I am delighted to see it there. Thank you for sharing this charming work. Sara
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