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Wave Dancer

WAVE DANCER In the stillness the sun smiles spanning wide her golden yellow teeth blowing wind is shadow quiet she is waiting waiting waiting.... Waiting and feeling.. slowly the stillness trembles! It is disturbed... little waves begin to creep and crawl.. Unabash! She goes! Brave and graceful to take the ride... Daring and excited to play with the waves... Up. Down. Left. and right sways... A rollercoaster along the foamy surface of sea She was not taken aback by what she lacks... An arm bitten by a stark sharp shark long ago Instead, She pursues the waves Fearless to stand - tango with the wave curves! a ballerina with a surf board moving ahead.. ahead ahead each tunnel wave... balancing on side and top of the wave.. power hugging made by the currents.. mind blowing love affair with the tides!!! her missing arm not forgotten but a precious welcoming history in embracing the world with her inspiring story of not ever ever quitting! of keeping the faith afire with each rough tough situation! of trusting Gods' reasons and purposes to everything.. of making the most even when something is lacking!!! a conqueror of weaknesses! a wave dancer of water tides and beyond! She is BETHANY HAMILTON!! ______________________________________________ Best free verse poem - Poetry Contest Sponsor SKAT A ~~~7th Place~~~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo 3:04 am, July 18, 2014

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Date: 7/27/2015 11:28:00 PM
Awesome pen Olive! Powerful words n wonderful expressions n here u hv a fine win dear! Big congrats!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 11:04:00 AM
thanks much Dr. Upma.. :D!
Date: 7/26/2015 12:46:00 AM
Her courage to get back out there gives us all something to think about. We love her here and you have done her story justice Olive. Outstanding! Congrats on your win! 7
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Date: 7/28/2015 11:03:00 AM
After I watched the movie I wrote this immediately.. :)!thanks much!
Date: 7/25/2015 11:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win my friend! Talent, heart, courage and beauty--the poem , the author and the surfer. A7..
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/28/2015 11:02:00 AM
thank you so much RObert.. :)!
Date: 7/25/2015 10:57:00 PM
Olive. Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/26/2015 7:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Skat.. =')
Date: 7/18/2014 2:36:00 PM
wonderful inspiring write
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/21/2014 9:50:00 AM
Thanks John.. :) I appreciate it.. :D
Date: 7/18/2014 5:25:00 AM
Another excellent rendition, Olive_eloi! You too are riding the waves together with an insatiable muse! Well done, // paul
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Date: 7/21/2014 9:49:00 AM
thank you so much Paul.. :D! i appreciate your comment. :)
Date: 7/18/2014 3:36:00 AM
Great story Olive very well portrayed my dear! Like ur writing style//Upma//
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Date: 7/21/2014 9:49:00 AM
thank you my dear dr. Upma.. :)
Date: 7/17/2014 7:47:00 PM
Wow what a great story sweetie, never giving up, god has a lot to offer even after difficulties, to keep going and going, that is encouraging, thanks for the great poem girl :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/20/2014 6:43:00 PM
:0 yes Cassie.. :) so let's all raise our hands and forever be grateful to Him.. :)
Date: 7/17/2014 7:22:00 PM
A remarkable story and poem Olive...hugs Tim
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Date: 7/20/2014 6:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Tim.. :D sorry for this late reply. :( been so busy :(

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