Wave

I looked at her sitting by the shore Picking those rounded beauties I carved from stones, Brushing it everyday, every hour Rounded, smooth and buffed. I glide to her gaining might by an inch Watching the spark in those happy eyes, Wanting to gift her to the infinite ocean I glide to her gaining might by an inch. Her feet I touch to greet her I glide caressing her tender skin, Taunting me with her laughter She holds the shore when I lift. She turns to her beloved by the shore Feeling me through her skin, Laughing through her eyes I could touch his soul through her body. In the serenity of that beautiful scene I recede in bliss watching their love, Wishing to see them everyday I recede in bliss watching their love. The majestic ocean speaks And I come back with that message, The stone of her colour, a gift I am a wave, wishing I were divine.

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Moon Flower

Date: 5/29/2016 12:16:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Sohail. :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/28/2016 3:22:00 AM

Sohail, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs

Skat A

Date: 5/28/2016 1:59:00 AM

Sohail,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2016 1:01:00 PM

Sohail,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Sohail Ansary
Date: 5/27/2016 5:11:00 PM

Thank you

Amrita Jha

Date: 5/27/2016 10:46:00 AM

This is beautiful. :)

Sohail Ansary
Date: 5/27/2016 11:04:00 AM

Thank you :)