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Watery Heat

Blazing proximity,
wild racing pulses,
unspoken signals,
silence speaking
more than words;

he takes her hand
leading to the room,
anticipation building,
rushing eagerly on
with each heartbeat;

his eyes intense on her,
she sheds her clothes
and him following suit
unable to wait any longer
for that magical moment;

raging bodies revealed
now but for tiny strips
hiding almost nothing
from the captive other,
mysteries fully bared;

the macho man grabs,
the temptress obeys,
knowing exactly well
what they both desire
as they run and dive…
into the swimming pool!

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  1. Date: 11/2/2008 4:08:00 PM
    Muahahahahahaha! I don't know what I love more the poem - or the comments! Too funny! : ) Guess who?

  1. Date: 11/2/2008 6:04:00 AM
    Very clever my friend. My sex filled mind was going down the path until you diverted somewhere else. I need to still get a smoke...had a good time...LOL..great work.

  1. Date: 11/2/2008 4:57:00 AM
    HA! lol Oh my...cold showers all around! I love it! lol I am laughing my arse off at you two males, all hot and bothered - men, so single-minded! lol all sex, all the time. lol Great poem, you really had me going there for a minute! Hot stuff, indeed. P.S-loved your comment yesterday. lol Yours too, Sean! lol Kristin

  1. Date: 11/2/2008 4:26:00 AM
    Freddie !!! , so this is what you did , to cool-down after Kristin's office hot-encounter !! Splish-Splash !!! ...Hope it wasn't the breast/stroke .....