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Watery Heat

Blazing proximity, wild racing pulses, unspoken signals, silence speaking more than words; he takes her hand leading to the room, anticipation building, rushing eagerly on with each heartbeat; his eyes intense on her, she sheds her clothes and him following suit unable to wait any longer for that magical moment; raging bodies revealed now but for tiny strips hiding almost nothing from the captive other, mysteries fully bared; the macho man grabs, the temptress obeys, knowing exactly well what they both desire as they run and dive… into the swimming pool!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/2/2008 4:08:00 PM
Muahahahahahaha! I don't know what I love more the poem - or the comments! Too funny! : ) Guess who?
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Date: 11/2/2008 6:04:00 AM
Very clever my friend. My sex filled mind was going down the path until you diverted somewhere else. I need to still get a smoke...had a good time...LOL..great work.
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Date: 11/2/2008 4:57:00 AM
HA! lol Oh my...cold showers all around! I love it! lol I am laughing my arse off at you two males, all hot and bothered - men, so single-minded! lol all sex, all the time. lol Great poem, you really had me going there for a minute! Hot stuff, indeed. P.S-loved your comment yesterday. lol Yours too, Sean! lol Kristin
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Date: 11/2/2008 4:26:00 AM
Freddie !!! , so this is what you did , to cool-down after Kristin's office hot-encounter !! Splish-Splash !!! ...Hope it wasn't the breast/stroke .....
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