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Dark gray culumus
bonds the aquamarine sea--
Whirling waterspout

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  1. Date: 9/25/2009 2:58:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery. I like the alliteration in the last line. Enjoyed your poem. Thank you for stopping by with your kind comment. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 5:52:00 AM
    Beautiful Haiku Ismael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 7:46:00 PM
    I've only seen one on TV... But I thought... Nature's Showing Us... We've still got things right here on earth to get fascinated with... Great Haiku MoonBee

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 1:26:00 PM
    I love this one. It is very interesting to watch these. Nature at its most interesting. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 7:59:00 AM
    Oooh, such a wonderful description, Ismael! I have seen the waterspouts from both onshore and offshore in a boat. They appear like towers to the sky! Excellent haiku! Love, Carolyn