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Watershed

Beneath waves that concede a change of life shapes of shifting forms hidden in ocean depths murky coloration of perpetual flux as fish without eyes cruise crustacean cousins in a midnight zone of black midst trouble changing sea acidity flowing currents once flush with species It's peaceful at the bottom in what can't be measured for the deeper one goes the familiar disappears like seaweed that displaces coral turbulent reef on the cusp of scant recovery Underwater paradise, surface waves of imposing rhythm forms that wash to shore life in the voracious jaws of damage what sustains a teardrop when anchored eyes open Poem composed; June 17, 2021

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Date: 6/28/2021 9:07:00 AM
A banquet of food for thought Brian. I like the image of the serenity in the depths of the ocean but also the image of the ocean weeping. Our oceans are precious treasures and we are their guardians! Congratulations on your win.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/28/2021 9:25:00 AM
Hello Sam, Thanks very much for the thumbs up. The piece originally garnered an NA, but I re-directed the poem + it received much appreciated recognition. Best regards, Brian
Date: 6/25/2021 1:14:00 PM
a fine piece of writing Brian, giving one some things to ponder indeed.
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Date: 6/25/2021 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon. Yes, our oceans are under siege on so many fronts. Be well. Brian
Date: 6/18/2021 11:10:00 AM
A wonderful water write. I love the water and the sand. I wonderful how much fun fish really do have. Have a blessed day/weekend.......................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/18/2021 12:10:00 PM
Thank you, Paula, for your stop by + kind remarks. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 6/18/2021 6:48:00 AM
Much to ponder, peace and loss suspended in salty tears. I do believe the oceans are collectively crying. We humans have done so much damage.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/18/2021 9:56:00 AM
Indeed, we have polluted our oceans. Thanks very much for your drop + comments Richard. Best wishes, Brian

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