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Watermelon

Green striped globe, trailing vine, your glories I relate; summer fruit, taste divine, you grow in southern states. Thick, heavy rind confines the richness we await sweetened by hot sunshine, red joy upon my plate. To choose well I refine the skills which help equate what hides in green shrine-- pick best one in the crate. yellow belly--one sign, a hollow thump will rate, sweet watermelon, mine, "Best one I ever ate!" Copyright, July 9, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 7/29/2014 9:19:00 PM
Yep, another winner - A true gem of a Quatrain dear lady...Nothing like getting soaked and sticky pigging out on melons! My favorite is pickled rinds...Oh yeah!
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Date: 7/29/2014 1:59:00 PM
Faye, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 7/28/2014 8:16:00 PM
A Southern boy at heart I love me some watermelon! Congrats on a fine win and great write!!
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Date: 7/28/2014 11:35:00 AM
Very enjoyable write...like any good watermelon! I go mad on them; they are thirst quenching. Congrats, Faye on a deserved win. // paul
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Date: 7/28/2014 8:37:00 AM
And back again wid huge congrats Faye on this tasteful delicious write my friend!
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:07:00 AM
Love this, dear Faye!.. Took me years to learn the right thump sound for ripeness, Lol.. Congrats on a great win! Hugs... Arlene
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Date: 7/28/2014 1:08:00 AM
very blissful and soothing write, Faye. congrats
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Date: 7/27/2014 11:46:00 PM
Ours are shipped in and not always perfect. It is wonderful when we are lucky enough to get the perfect one. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/27/2014 8:20:00 PM
One of the simple joys of summertime! There is nothing better than juicy watermelon on a hot day.... A very nice write, Faye! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/10/2014 6:56:00 AM
Watermelon!!!! One of my faves so good for beating the summer heat!!!!!! Yummy yummy one! :D
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/12/2014 2:23:00 PM
Thanks, Olive. Yes, they are delicious.
Date: 7/9/2014 10:40:00 PM
YUMMY poem. I had the flu last week and my second day, all I wanted to eat was watermelon. It's the most refreshing of all the fruits. just love it!!
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Date: 7/9/2014 10:39:00 PM
Faye, I was finally looking over your new contest rules and I wanted to let you know how refreshing it is to see someone promising exactly what will be fairly delivered and PROMPTLY as well. I am so sick of people never closing contests, just leaving them to sit, sometimes for an eternity. That just isn't right!! Now to see your poem.
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/11/2014 7:55:00 PM
Yes, I think this is a real problem that ought to be addressed...but, who is Team Poetry Soup? I can't find out. They are like phantoms. I don't like to complain, either. Anyway, I want to do it the way it should be done. I don't like everyone writing to meet guidelines and the work going unappreciated. That's my rant. lol
Date: 7/9/2014 2:33:00 PM
- Mmm.... juicy and cooling in the summer heat - Thank you, Faye :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/9/2014 2:36:00 PM
They are so yummy...like cotton candy. Put a big bite in your mouth...and there is nothing there. Thanks!
Date: 7/9/2014 2:11:00 PM
Oh Faye ! That's my fav one,, in full bloom these days here ,, tasteful write !
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/9/2014 2:36:00 PM
Thank you, Upma...had a good one for lunch and it inspired this little write.
Date: 7/9/2014 2:01:00 PM
ooh lovely description would love a slice right now:-) Hugs jan xx
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/9/2014 2:03:00 PM
Just had one...really good. Thanks.

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