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Waterfall Serenade

majestic mountains waterfall violins play velvet string music Cynthia

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/31/2012 12:08:00 AM
Nice idea for a haiku poem. Just two things: the second word of your title is correctly spelled "serenade". Also, you have six syllables in your last line which is one too many.
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Cynthia Alvez
Date: 8/31/2012 3:18:00 AM
Robert, Once again I must thank you for the "alert"...."Haste does indeed make waste!" I appreciate your help. So glad you clicked in. Cynthia

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