Waterfall

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Moksh Gupta

Date: 5/14/2016 2:55:00 AM

THANKS TO U ALL FOR ENCORAGING ME as many of u including Skat wants to know about me it is there' i am a Indian studying in 9. i have very less time for poetry but i do it in free time and replying is not possible to every comment. hope that not the matter it is my first english poem. i have written many more poems but in hindi. i think its enough for now' itake a live thank u hugs

Skat A

Date: 4/25/2016 8:12:00 PM

Moksh, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Moksh Gupta
Date: 5/14/2016 2:55:00 AM

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/24/2016 11:59:00 AM

Moksh, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs.

Moon Flower

Date: 4/24/2016 12:38:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Moksh. :)

Moksh Gupta
Date: 4/24/2016 3:34:00 AM

thanks alot and i would like to tell u all that i am a shool going student studing in 9th

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2016 12:29:00 AM

MOksh ,,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Moksh Gupta
Date: 4/24/2016 3:44:00 AM

thanks u it is a pleasure to be a part is of this amazing site i am also looking forward for other poems it is my first english poem and it is also my school project as self composed poem thank u again