Waterfall

WATERFALL Spray rising a continual mist prism-tinged light ascending an archway welcoming artistic etching tool of nature’s surging alterations. Purity of fluid mantric chant echoes the valley’s secret prayer. Rejoicing droplets in communion ride the roaring tumult to the shore. John G. Lawless 10/26/2014 submitted to - SOME FORM OF CRYSTALLINE- Poetry Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2014 11:27:00 PM

geeez, why the heck did I not see this one on the list tonight? Maybe for the syllable count?? Anyway, it sure is a nice one, John.

John Lawless
Date: 11/7/2014 7:20:00 AM

Not sure what happened Andrea, the 3-6-9 syllable count checked out on the Poetrysoup syllable counter app .... any way thanks again for your continuing support and comments.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/29/2014 4:50:00 PM

WOW! Excellent imagery and far from cliche. Just what the doctor ordered, great job John.

John Lawless
Date: 11/7/2014 7:22:00 AM

Thanks Maurice, always good to hear from you. Sorry for the late response but life, as it has a way of doing, has been mugging the muse.