Waterfall

waterfall trickles thawing ice releases drops... moss 'pon rocks turns green

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K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 8/21/2013 4:27:00 PM

This is what you do best, horde words! incredibly suave.

Anne Rutherford

Date: 7/30/2013 6:03:00 AM

Beautifully said Sara, in those few lines you made us visualize the ice melting. Well crafted Haiku. hugs Anne

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/29/2013 7:18:00 PM

this is serious haiku.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/29/2013 11:01:00 AM

from ice to green; how transformational.... a dleightful, vivid 'ku, sara... amazing... kindly see my reply to your question re queen of sheba on my page..:) huggs

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/29/2013 9:25:00 AM

This is a nice image my friend, where did you see this? I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!