Waterfall

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Glisten fluid slosh, Plunging, hurtling, misting beads, Scouring stone shapes.

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/25/2022 7:40:00 AM

Strong image in a truly fine Haiku. Your use of 'ing' verb forms gives vigor to the piece. Best wishes, Brian

Thomas Wells
Date: 9/1/2022 6:32:00 PM

Hello Brian, I always appreciate your insights about my poetry. Be well, Thomas.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/28/2022 3:24:00 PM

Hello Thomas Wells, Waterfalls are beautiful. I could stand there for hours just watching the waterfall. When the sun shines on it there a rainbow of colors to see. I hop all is wlll with you. enjoy your evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2022 4:24:00 AM

Hello Thomas, yes the waterfall has a way to clear the mind. So does the rivers , lakes etc. I am glad to hear that you are well. . Yes I am well thank you. Blessings my friend.

Thomas Wells
Date: 7/28/2022 8:20:00 PM

Hello, Darlene. I know just what you mean. They have a way of clearing the mind of all tension and worry. Thank you for your comment. I am well and I hope are too!