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Waterfall

Cascading from the hilltops. Pooling by the trees. Finding paths between the rocky peaks. Shimmering back to the sun its beams. A powerful, constant feature. Uninterrupted in flow. Naturalists will search and discover Where the water goes. Majestic, mighty and loud. Yet somehow it feels so peaceful. A waterfall glorifies its surroundings. It brings pleasure to many people. When outdoors, do head towards That rushing, gushing sound. Take it in. Appreciate it While we still walk the ground. Written 23rd November 2021 For the "W" contest Sponsor Constance La France

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Date: 11/29/2021 2:15:00 PM
Natasha, congratulations on the Honorable Mention in my "W" New Poems Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 11/30/2021 9:38:00 AM
Hello Constance. Thank you for the HM. Some great themes in your contests and it's always a pleasure to take part. Many warm wishes :-D
Date: 11/23/2021 4:01:00 PM
Hello Natasha ... easy to read and imagine the constant of a waterfall in your poem. The mist creating cool air on a hot day is so refreshing - thank you Natasha - Lindsay
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 11/24/2021 6:29:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay. It's a nice theme to write about :-D
Date: 11/23/2021 6:27:00 AM
Wonderful flow and imagery, good luck in the contest, hugs jan xx
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 11/23/2021 6:32:00 AM
Thanks Jan. I got confused between "naturist" and "naturalist" and decided to change it... Two very similar words with very different meanings (shocked emoji) lol :-D

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