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Water Music

Water Music Dribble dribble…and a bit more, then it is morning after a restless night. Outside a cold sun and icy wind; leaves, many big enough to over vital parts, and have the colour of unhealthy urine, dance frantically about, not a decorous last dance but a crazy salsa, yet not as many leaves as yesterday ; soon streets will look inhumanly clean to the delight of tidy people who think order is a virtue…and naked trees, emperors exposed, just stand there impervious and silent. Dribble, dribble and not a strong, youthful water fountain in sight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/1/2012 2:36:00 PM
Alot of layers in this write, it needs reading more than once! Light & Love
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/2/2012 7:05:00 AM
thank you Debbie
Date: 11/30/2012 9:38:00 AM
Are you saying Handel is old? I've never read falling leaves described so beautifully inventive as yours are. I love "emperors exposed." I feel like one of those falling leaves dancing the salsa yet. love, Kathy
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/1/2012 1:56:00 PM
when you get old urination beomes trickle
Date: 11/30/2012 6:00:00 AM
Great images you have penned here... Michael
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/2/2012 7:06:00 AM
thank you Michael J

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