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Water Lily

You captivate me for the very first time An outstanding beauty that truly outshines. Sparkling glitters while sun rages high! Never seen an enchantment that takes me so high. You float in the water without wearing any fear. But I’m drowning to joy when I see you too clear. Will you swim and come to me real close? Your scent is perfume that tickles my nose. Walk in the water with a beautiful poise. Splendid petals do make a good noise. Let the rain come down and shower you now. Gaze you dancing while I whine and say wow! You’re the most adorable flower of all… Please don’t leave me in summer or fall. You’re my most favorite flower of all. Can I paint you smiling on my empty wall?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/5/2015 9:36:00 PM
Good write, Lei! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/4/2015 8:51:00 AM
Wow! Thanks so much! I'm happy to read your comments :) Hugs
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Date: 12/4/2015 4:30:00 AM
Congrats on ur fine win with this awesome write Lei!
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Date: 12/3/2015 1:24:00 PM
a charming poem Lei congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2015 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations Lei.
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Date: 12/3/2015 11:20:00 AM
Lei, Congratulations on your Screwed VIII WIN... Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 11/8/2015 3:23:00 PM
Lei-----Wonderful write you take me away--Excellent 7+++ -----DO look me up let me know what you think
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