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Water hibernation

Placid and frigid
Clad shrouded stones of splendor
In a winter bath

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  1. Date: 3/7/2010 12:15:00 PM
    Congratulations Laura, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann (Please call me I lost your number)

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 1:53:00 PM
    Great job in the contest and congratulations, Laura!

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 10:06:00 AM
    A nice honor mentioned Laura. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 7:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 9:52:00 PM
    So very nice Haiku! Laura! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 7:56:00 PM
    Placid and frigid - I like the two words put together in the beginning of your Haiku. Cool. :) Thanks for your comment too. Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 5:31:00 PM
    love the way this Haiku rolls off the tongue, Laura. congrats on your placement in this contest!

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 2:31:00 PM
    Nice, very nice Haiku, Laura! Congratulations! Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 12:38:00 PM
    Laura, Wow, I would have graded your outstanding haiku at the top, especially with your last line. Congratulations in being in the winner's circle. Blessings, Connie

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 11:36:00 AM
    Laura, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 10:27:00 AM
    Great winter Haiku. I can feel the shivers. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 9:02:00 AM
    Really pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 5:55:00 AM
    Congrats Laura on your HM in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a beautiful Haiku for a lovely poetess.. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 3:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Laura. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 3/3/2010 1:48:00 AM
    Laura, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 6:32:00 AM
    This one is good! Is it for Raul's contest? Some people, like you, can come up with some beautiful words to describe beautiful images. Nice! Good luck in the contest. Smiles, Dane Ann (soup mail)

  1. Date: 2/25/2010 9:50:00 AM
    I wish you the best in Raul's contest Laura. Have a wonderful day my friend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 7:41:00 PM
    I too used hibernation in my haiku!!! : ) Very well written haiku, Laura. Good luck in his Contest. Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 7:25:00 PM
    Laura, I hope you place high with this little beauty!! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 5:55:00 PM
    Oh I love that last line especially!! Nicely done, Laura!! Love, Carrie