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Water flows

How sweetly flows this water  
onto bright gilt rocks 
pray shine for me forever 

Copyright © Joanne Carty

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  1. Date: 7/2/2009 3:19:00 PM
    Nice write. I'm thirsty and I feel like swimming for some reason.

  1. Date: 6/5/2009 8:58:00 AM
    This my first time reading you, I like your work and will return later. You are a great poet and I hope we shall be great as friends

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 5:53:00 PM
    awesome haiku, never see 7-5-7 before, but its definitely working out =]