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Water Element

When the vital element(earth) I live on looks parched and dry anxiously I gaze upwards for precipitation to come from sky, thanking the rainfall that invigorates all life and living eloquently I praise thee as in hydration you retain my being, requisite Life element, I daresay, you help my heart beat running. it must be crystallization of a great thought that made you, you take any form, shape and space, supporting all life forms you retain every race in norm. God may seem impermeable or inaccessible to ordinary souls like me but I see you as my flowing visible deity that cleanses my soul and quench’s my thirsty body. 2-April-2016 Elements Part 3: WATER - Poetry Contest Included these 6 words in the poem as per the contest 1) HYDRATION (2) REQUISITE (3) PRECIPITATION (4) IMPERMEABLE (5) INVIGORATE (6) CRYSTALLIZATION. Sponsored by: Brian Davey

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2016 11:58:00 PM

Sathya, Congrats on your win. XOX ~LINDA~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/17/2016 10:25:00 PM

Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write Sathya ..

Lu Loo

Date: 4/17/2016 11:44:00 AM

Sathya, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Brian Davey

Date: 4/17/2016 6:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in my Water Element contest with such a deserving write! crystallization of a great though it was, wasn't it? Thank you for entering

Sathya Babu
Date: 4/17/2016 8:38:00 AM

Thanks Brain........I enjoyed participating in this contest esp in using the list of words you had given. BTW not sure if you noticed, I have not used the term Water (other than the acrostic) as a word anywhere in the poem except in the Title. Thanks Again.