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Spirit cleanse my soul Cleanse all life for everyone Please cleanse us

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Date: 3/25/2014 12:23:00 AM
Interesting write. However, try to find synonymous equivalents for "cleanse", such as "wash", "purify", "bathe", etc. It's not a good idea to use the same word excessively. That's why Monsieur Roget invented the Thesaurus.
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