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Water

Water flows along a river Water dances in the sea Water becomes famous As lakes to see You drink it everyday You sip, swallow and gulp it There's mineral and spring, You can even get it fizzy Or mixed into a smoothie

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 1:07:00 AM

AWESOME POEM

Duncan Chappell

Date: 9/15/2013 1:27:00 AM

i can taste brazil crazy drinks now and see all the passion around me thank you

Edward Orozco

Date: 4/20/2013 11:59:00 AM

Very pleasant read. Thank you for sharing and welcome to the soup - Edward

Skat A

Date: 4/18/2013 2:49:00 PM

Alexandra :-), Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT"