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Water

Water
 i whispered

droplets pellucid 
means so much
releasing fret 
embracing soul 

carib of earth 
preserve humankind
 without you 
we all died dry 

gurgling your song
drains body 
corroborated intention 

keep you 

 clear
 clean 
fresh 

not silenced shall all  tongues
want you to remain
dont  keep silent 
sing out  loud 
its beauty

water
hear my calls
my intimate
is all yours

 ~ ( c ) sukmawati komala ~ 
25 february 2013

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  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:08:00 AM
    A poem about water - it's a beauty. Water is a very important element, without it we would die. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:45:00 AM
    Water deserves more acknowledgement! Love your work! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:36:00 PM
    Water is something Mars lacks. Our planet earth should consider itself lucky.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 6:48:00 PM
    I love this because it really does embody how it feels to be in physical contact with water. It almost parches you just by reading it, and I mean that in the very best of ways. The structure of the poem is like a column, reminiscent of water, too. This poem weeps with adoration and feeling.

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 2:57:00 PM
    a tribute to water!! so beautifully written!

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 7:39:00 AM
    You blend in with nature as if you were born of air and water my dear, hope your keeping well, and thank you for the drink of fresh invigorating water poetry, to the sea of love we shall return again and again, where our friendship was first born, have a great day my Komalian Angel, my new name for you,hope you like it. xxx

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 5:11:00 AM
    This so good..so good