Water

Water i whispered droplets pellucid means so much releasing fret embracing soul carib of earth preserve humankind without you we all died dry gurgling your song drains body corroborated intention keep you clear clean fresh not silenced shall all tongues want you to remain dont keep silent sing out loud its beauty water hear my calls my intimate is all yours ~ ( c ) sukmawati komala ~ 25 february 2013

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/5/2013 9:08:00 AM

A poem about water - it's a beauty. Water is a very important element, without it we would die. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/26/2013 1:45:00 AM

Water deserves more acknowledgement! Love your work! Always, Laura

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/25/2013 8:36:00 PM

Water is something Mars lacks. Our planet earth should consider itself lucky.

Jeremy Martin

Date: 2/25/2013 6:48:00 PM

I love this because it really does embody how it feels to be in physical contact with water. It almost parches you just by reading it, and I mean that in the very best of ways. The structure of the poem is like a column, reminiscent of water, too. This poem weeps with adoration and feeling.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2013 2:57:00 PM

a tribute to water!! so beautifully written!

Betty Bolden

Date: 2/25/2013 5:11:00 AM

This so good..so good