Water

Rushing waves crash down A single rock at the end Beyond beautiful.

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Marymkilker Marymkilker

Date: 3/5/2011 12:44:00 PM

nice.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/30/2010 4:43:00 PM

a beautiful image. Light 7 Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/17/2010 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Rick, john

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/17/2010 8:07:00 AM

A stunning image in your haiku, John. Congratulations on being in the winners' circle. Best wishes, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/17/2010 7:30:00 AM

Congrats John on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water .. enjoy today with luv..

Rick Parise

Date: 12/16/2010 10:05:00 PM

CONGRATS TO YOU ~I ENJOYED!!!!!!!!!Rick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2010 10:01:00 PM

Congratualtions, john. Love that "single rock" line! LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2010 6:24:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup John. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/14/2010 1:30:00 PM

Nice write on the flowing water nice image of waves cashing on the single rock, John

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/14/2010 12:39:00 PM

Great Haiku..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Reads like a winner to me..Sara