Water

The deep depths of the Cold and blue and silent for A moment for me; Wrapping around my odd mind, Forgiving my small failures.

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Date: 10/7/2010 8:33:00 AM

wonderful entry, congrats on your win in the contest

Date: 10/7/2010 5:39:00 AM

I love your Tanka Alicia especially the last line, congrats on your win :)

Date: 10/6/2010 5:34:00 PM

Congratilations Alicia on your worthy poem's top ten win. Agape, Moses

Date: 10/6/2010 3:40:00 PM

Congrats Alicia on your win in Chris's contest with this excellent Tanka entry.. enjoy with luv..

Date: 10/6/2010 3:05:00 PM

Forgiving my small failures. What a cool thought for topic of sanctuary. Congratulions, Alicia. LUv, Andrea

Date: 10/6/2010 1:07:00 PM

Many congratulations Alicia on your win in Chris's contest with this fine Tanka >> James

Date: 10/6/2010 11:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your top tenth place in this Tanka contest. Love, Joyce

Date: 10/6/2010 10:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Alicia in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "T(h)anka You". Love, Carol

Date: 10/6/2010 4:28:00 AM

Enjoyed this one, Alicia :)-- congrats for being in the winners' circle! -- nikko :)

Date: 10/6/2010 2:17:00 AM

love the last line in this wonderful poem. congrats on your placement. Harry

Date: 10/2/2010 2:27:00 PM

Very impressive writenabout water, Alicia