Water

Green green green green green Water gives life to all green Water restores all

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James Fraser

Date: 10/9/2009 1:51:00 PM

And water is the source of life, nice piece Sara >> James

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/8/2009 10:44:00 AM

Even my thirst after a long day of football.... Replenishing my energy for the second half......:JP]

Marty Owens

Date: 10/8/2009 9:46:00 AM

Nice Sara...Loved reading it. Marty

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/7/2009 5:51:00 PM

nicel one mom, look at my haikus and tell me which one I should put in the contest?

P Sheart

Date: 10/7/2009 4:16:00 PM

Hi Sara, Gert's right, I don't think anything on this earth would live without water. Keep writing! Love Light Truth Patty

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/7/2009 3:11:00 PM

Great haiku, Sara! We would not live without water. Keep writing and let us hope for clean watwer. I have been very busy because of my intention to move. And thanky for your comments. Gert