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Watching and Waiting

she stood there motionless, looking out to sea her thoughts in turmoil, at last she was free from the beatings that once she endured, bruised and battered she got away, now she is waiting for the day her life will one day be secured, with loving arms, being reassured that love is here to stay. she waits, for his ship sails flapping, to come in sight knowing that soon love will salve her battered body, only bruises made with love, on lips, he kissed with aplomb
penned Oct 1 2016. contest: three style11

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Date: 10/23/2016 2:43:00 AM
Dear Seren, congratulations on your placement , so nice! there is happiness in the end //love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/22/2016 10:24:00 PM
Very good, Seren, congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/22/2016 10:56:00 AM
this hit me very hard as I have had similar experiences in my past..well done for touching me deeply and the rhyme is amazing...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :) -luloo
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/22/2016 11:27:00 AM
thank you Laura for placing me. ....Seren
Date: 10/4/2016 5:39:00 PM
Wow, this is so beautiful, what poetry should be, and the photo goes so well with this poem!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/22/2016 11:29:00 AM
Thank you am pleased it was placed in the contest....Seren
Date: 10/2/2016 1:10:00 PM
Beautiful poem Seren. I hope he shows soon for her.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/22/2016 11:29:00 AM
Thanks Tim....Seren

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