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WATCH ME

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WATCH ME

I'm leaving with no return
I will not stop and talk
My respect you have to earn 
How could you let me walk

I continue on my way alone
Hope your feeling guilty
As you stand on your throne
Think about life without me

As you watch me walk by
Still can't find the words
Don't want you to see me cry
Will you ever find the nerve

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  1. Date: 4/29/2010 1:04:00 PM
    Sometimes things are not said that need to be said. Words of love and hope in a relationship are vital for its survival. this was a very good poem.

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 8:38:00 AM
    I wish you the best in the contest, Faleshia :) Interesting take on the challenge :)

  1. Date: 4/29/2010 6:35:00 AM
    good one, enjoyed!!

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 8:25:00 PM
    The other person has no backbone. Nice write. Qui.

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 6:26:00 PM
    well done , enjoyed the read, sure he will find the nerve,..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 4:30:00 PM
    Nice take on the painting, Faleshia! Great job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 4:00:00 PM
    Very nice Quatrain Faleshia and good luck in the contest ... all the women who entered seem to have written similar on the photo presented ... guess we have all...been there and done that ...enjoyed your creative write today...luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 1:23:00 PM
    Another good one Faleshia....I like it.......Larry

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 9:47:00 AM
    Love it!!! Nicely done.

  1. Date: 4/28/2010 9:31:00 AM
    Great write for the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara