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Watch Me

I'm leaving with no return I will not stop and talk My respect you have to earn How could you let me walk I continue on my way alone Hope your feeling guilty As you stand on your throne Think about life without me As you watch me walk by Still can't find the words Don't want you to see me cry Will you ever find the nerve

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Travis Tapley

Date: 4/29/2010 1:04:00 PM

Sometimes things are not said that need to be said. Words of love and hope in a relationship are vital for its survival. this was a very good poem.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2010 8:38:00 AM

I wish you the best in the contest, Faleshia :) Interesting take on the challenge :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/29/2010 6:35:00 AM

good one, enjoyed!!

Qui Bee

Date: 4/28/2010 8:25:00 PM

The other person has no backbone. Nice write. Qui.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2010 6:26:00 PM

well done , enjoyed the read, sure he will find the nerve,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/28/2010 4:00:00 PM

Very nice Quatrain Faleshia and good luck in the contest ... all the women who entered seem to have written similar on the photo presented ... guess we have all...been there and done that ...enjoyed your creative write today...luv.. Linda-Marie

Larry Belt

Date: 4/28/2010 1:23:00 PM

Another good one Faleshia....I like it.......Larry

Joe Flach

Date: 4/28/2010 9:47:00 AM

Love it!!! Nicely done.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/28/2010 9:31:00 AM

Great write for the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara