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Watch Her Break

Scrambled legs Tingling fingers Grayscale of concrete. Shimmering metal Dancing air No energy to deplete. Rasping breaths Stomach twisted Into a crumpled bow. Quietly shrinking Girl in a dryer Shriveled lips of snow. Lurching throat Dried up tongue But nothing will come up, Scarecrow arms And glass-shard legs Are never thin enough.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2013 12:39:00 AM

Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 4:06:00 PM

Hi Caitlin, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2013 11:05:00 PM

Caitlin, wow! love it... -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda"