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Watch and Wait

Stillness seeds this cell of death-borne illness, underscores the needs of one who cannot function by himself. Bed sheets icy white, fading flowers once bright, now lifeless, litter uselessly. A steady stream of visitors will offer their support, feeling helpless, hopeless, as they fumble for the words stuck in their throats. Monitors wink, blink their indifference; scant recognition, little consolation for a father and his sorrow-stricken son.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/14/2016 11:01:00 AM
The emotions cling to this piece like a second skin. A little melancholy, with a slow pace that entraps the reader into your emotional flow. Good work. Emile. #7
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/14/2016 12:24:00 PM
Thank you for your kind remarks Emile... I am most grateful. Best wishes, Keith

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