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Wasting Time

The winds are picking up out of the east Large billowing clouds begin to move on shore Like giant balloons at a Macy’s Day Parade They begin to take shape And our imaginations get the better of us There’s Dumbo, that big gray one lumbering overhead There’s a fish or is it a snake? We lay there our backs against the windshield Hoping time never stops Wanting the memories to last forever A fantasy that never pops The wind is getting gusty now It’s about to rain on our parade The creatures have turned into a dark line Edging upon our dreams of time Closer now time will stop As the rain comes down We run for cover of the car Inside we smile and laugh For what seemed like a waste of time Was never spent so well

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/9/2013 4:38:00 AM
Wow. I see both imagination and reality in this one. Thankfully we will always have those cherished memories to give us some hope when the dark gloomy clouds loom above. But sometimes a good rain is good. This poem is gooder than good I'll tell you that much! Always, Laura
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Date: 8/30/2013 2:02:00 PM
"Clouds as big as giant balloons... a fantasy that never pops" Full of clever and descriptive coreography combined with with a deep sensitivity. I like the romantic quality of this one :)
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 8/30/2013 4:55:00 PM
I was thinking about young lovers laying with their minds so open. And how good it feels to be that free. You as always got it. thanks ~Kilmer
Date: 8/26/2013 9:36:00 AM
Lot to remember.....nice poem :) A~D
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 8/26/2013 9:06:00 PM
Memories are what drives life. thanks A~D for taking the time to read and comment.~Kilmer
Date: 8/26/2013 9:36:00 AM
Hello Stephen, I think I am impressed on how you compared the clouds moving in to one of my most precious event. Macy’s Day Parade,, yes the giant balloons... never stop. You are correct on the imagination... How these memories to last forever. sorry the event was spoiled for you... thank you for sharing this one... Linda
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 8/26/2013 9:05:00 PM
Thanks Linda, As always I appreciate your comments and welcome your critiques. Thank you for taking the time to read my work.~Kilmer

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