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Waste of Haste

Mockingbird outside my window sings cheerfully throughout the night, while my harried song resonates only in hours when the sun shines. First the chugging of tea, sounds of traffic on the way to work. No matter how much is accomplished, I never seem to catch up. “Make haste,” the boss growls. Fingers glide more quickly o’er the keyboard. Deadlines, deadlines -- stop only for one deep breath, How I envy the mockingbird, carefree and welcome in my yard, enjoying the garden I tend only on week’s end when the time clock isn’t punched. Pressure builds minute-by-minute, hour-by-hour, day-by-day. Who stops to smell flowers while burning daylight for pittance pay? Take me to another era when families worked in fields together, chores were enjoyed beneath bright rays and modern times had not yet intruded.
*Written April 24, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/14/2017 1:45:00 AM
My wife taught me: it is not a race. But then escaping the rat race and leaving the hamster race only came to me through depression. What a gift. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 5/26/2015 6:16:00 PM
Love the message in your poem, Carolyn. How true...Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:38:00 PM
Carolyn, the first stanza with its oppositional couplets opened the door to this daily grind of lives devoured by matters of consequences (exposed by The Little Prince). Thank you for participating in the contest.
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Date: 5/24/2015 7:23:00 PM
Congratulations..My favorite line, "When modern times had not yet intruded"
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:22:00 PM
Carolyn, there was a time when things were more simple but there we also great hardships we do not have nowadays, your poem was beautifully written, well done 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, a day. . . some of things only take a moment really
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Date: 4/27/2015 6:26:00 AM
Years gone by had its good and its bad..Creative way to compare the past with the present..Poverty was a constant companion to so many of my parents generation..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/27/2015 12:26:00 PM
Wish we could go back to those days. The togetherness of family is absent for many of us today. Enjoy being with your family each day!
Date: 4/26/2015 12:41:00 PM
The conscious mind extends itself beyond our expected norms and we enter a world composed of reality defused with imagination, where happiness is tentative and so precious as to awe us with its beauty and scare us with its fragility. Emile. #7
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Date: 4/24/2015 2:49:00 PM
we seem to live by the clock Carolyn the hours and minutes rush by and yet another day has passed - oh how to be free as a bird ! Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2015 2:00:00 PM
lol:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/25/2015 1:53:00 PM
Thank you for the Soup mail, Jan Now I know why you didn't know what I was thinking. LOL

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