Washed Away

That new wave of love...... has washed away my name......... from the sand of your heart......

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Joanna Smith

Date: 3/22/2013 10:31:00 PM

Short, sweet, and wonderfully written

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/22/2013 10:32:00 PM

Thanks, Joanna! :)

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/15/2013 1:47:00 PM

Uniquely presented, Teach! Very creative... hugs, your friend Jack xox

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/17/2013 1:14:00 PM

Like being called TEACH! Good one, Jack! Any good teachers that have left an impression on ya? Had a crush on any? Hmmmm something to think and write about, eh?

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/15/2013 7:11:00 AM

This is quite the visual. Well done. Have a great day Eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/17/2013 1:14:00 PM

Thanks, Richard! :) You too! Hope all is well, my dear.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/14/2013 6:36:00 PM

awww. what a wonderful image, though!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/17/2013 1:15:00 PM

Hugs, Ilene! My way of saying...thanks! :)

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/14/2013 4:28:00 PM

Nice analogy, sad but there are prettier beaches out there. This one is going to my fav's...-R

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/17/2013 1:13:00 PM

Oh WOW! Thanks, Raul! Yes...good to know there are other beaches out there! :)