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Was I Condemned?

Was I condemned from the start To live life with this heart That's filled up with so much hate and pain No sunshine just rain When I try to go Forward, try to fly right They tell me I'm wrong Never will I be right My feelings locked In a cage I have so much damn rage Rains of hate Cast down upon me Tears of hurt Falls down my cheeks Razor blades tearing at my soul... Was I condemned from the start To live life with this heart That's filled up with so much hate and pain No sunshine just rain...

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Ali Matheny

Date: 12/16/2008 10:37:00 AM

WOW!!!!! That's very. . . . . I can't even find words just. . WOW!!!! I Love IT!!!! Love Your Friend Alexz ^_^

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/15/2008 2:15:00 PM

i love the way you use so meaningful rhymes. i wonder if it is that i can relate to you so much. some of your poetry could have been writen by me. but now i find myself on the oppisite end. a giver of abuse or so i have been accused. or like you condemed. John H Loving III

Christy Hardy

Date: 12/15/2008 1:09:00 PM

This poem has the makings for a beautiful gospel song....in my mind I was rearranging some of your words, and leaving out some, it would be a beautiful song....I write songs, and am now working on one...love this, give praise to our Lord, and He will reward us with so many blessings, always, Christy