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Warrior Princess

Warrior princess the weaver of words. She wields the septre of the night. Commands the heavens and the birds. Watch her face bathed in moonlight. He has no will power to resist her charms. She wields the septre of the night. A strong man like a baby in her arms. She writes each move that he makes. He has no willpower to resist her charms. He knows he has made his mistakes. Why did he walk through Fantasies door? She writes each move that he makes. He bows before her head on the floor. "forgive me for invading your dreams" Why did he walk through fantasies door? All the power is not hers it seems. Warrior princess the weaver of words. "forgive me for invading your dreams" He commands the heavens she is the bird! Eileen wrote a poem about a man invading her dreams I wrote this one for her, the stranger flips the tables. I hope you enjoy Eileen!

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Date: 5/9/2014 12:12:00 PM
And here I am again...wondering where the weaver of words has gone...She seems to have lost her charm... :( Lovely write! I'll treasure it always.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2014 12:23:00 PM
I'm teary eyed. Thanks, Richard. Those last couple of blogs somehow killed my desire to write....I'm...wordless! Thank you for believing in me...It is a great help to me.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/9/2014 12:16:00 PM
Based on your last two offerings I would say she is alive and well and as fierce as ever!
Date: 5/9/2014 12:10:00 PM
And here I am again...wondering where the weaver of words has gone...She seems to have lost her charm... :( Lovely write! I'll treasure it always.
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Date: 9/1/2013 8:16:00 AM
Thanks to all for the kind comments, I am falling behind on responses but I do appreciate the visits.
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Date: 9/1/2013 1:26:00 AM
:) I love coming back to this, Richard...Such a beautiful poem...again, thank you. Please check your soup mail! :) Thanks...have a great night...
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Date: 7/31/2013 2:19:00 PM
I love what you did for Elleen here. So wonderful to be inspired this way. It's heavenly!
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Date: 7/31/2013 10:41:00 AM
Oh....all the power is not hers it seems.....great poem Richard....she is a great inspiration to us all...awesome job...
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Date: 7/31/2013 8:25:00 AM
Another outstanding poem, the warrior princess a picture perfect poem, you have great talent for writing stories, I so enjoyed the read well done, blessings sueellen
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Date: 7/31/2013 8:13:00 AM
Love the fantasy! Well-written!...Milt
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Date: 7/30/2013 8:58:00 PM
S P E E C H L E S S!!!! Where....where can I find the words, Richard....Ah...every line enchanting...every single one....7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7 7....STRAIGHT to my favs to read OVER and OVER and OVER again. THANK YOU! PS...I'm only a warrior princess in my dreams...in real life...I'm a softie who gets bent out of shape...easily! PS2...you used a Terzanelle...my favorite form of you work! It doesn't get better than this, Richard!!! SWEET!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2013 6:44:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed! Have a great day Eileen.
Date: 7/30/2013 7:25:00 PM
I'm sure she will love this Rick, I like the reply in this, super write. BTW, I gave my job up in the helium balloon factory, I didnt like being spoken too in that tone of voice lol. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2013 6:45:00 AM
It appears you are correct my friend. Thanks for commenting.

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