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Man strives throughout his life, to gain affliction,
He is a warrior, for his life, not for the nation.
Since birth, he attempts to win positions,
This marks his ambitions to make collision.

Since the very day he takes birth,
Has to struggle, making life worth.
When an infant, he began to observe,
As he grows, life takes curve.

Arriving to youth, steps up to progress,
With his ammunitions, struggles for desired bliss.
Arising towards his goal never looks back,
Stalking his dream, for success, he never gets slack.

As the warrior grows old, he drops arm,
Retired soldier gets pension as acquired charm.
As death draws its curtains, he tell,
Not to conquer, but to fight well.

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  1. Date: 9/29/2009 8:03:00 PM
    And.....kudos on this selected poem going through the finals, Akash! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 12:09:00 PM
    Akash, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 11:59:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, it's a pleasure to have read for you :-) God Bless, always, Adell

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 10:42:00 AM
    Akash, congratulations on having this poem featured this week! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 3:07:00 AM
    I was looking at your featured work and have to say I was quite happy with your work. I enjoyed it a great deal a great deal of insight was given when you wrote this very well done Robert...

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    Date: 5/8/2012 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Robert :)
  1. Date: 9/25/2009 4:30:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 3:14:00 PM
    PS--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 1:45:00 PM
    Powerful piece. Nice use of rhyme. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 11:53:00 AM
    Akash, congrats on being featured this week...Raul

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 10:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 6:40:00 AM
    Dear Akash, Congatulations on this well derserved feature of the week. Lainie

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 4:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Akash. Love, Carol