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Warmth of Lips

dressing the twilight with rhinestones of red passion lovers flame warm lips Creative Haiku for Charlotte Puddifoot Sept 21/2014

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/2/2014 12:59:00 AM

your time to blaze a winning trail; so splendid, rhoma.. sweet congrats on your top spot!

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/28/2014 8:26:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery. Congrats.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/28/2014 7:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem Rhoma

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/28/2014 4:27:00 AM

THIS ONE IS A BEAUTY AND DESERVES A WIN.. CONGRATS DEAR FRIEND MALIK

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/28/2014 12:03:00 AM

That's real romantic n hot Rhoma! Congrats on top place win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 10:02:00 PM

oooh lalala hot hot hot. Congrats for top win.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 5:38:00 PM

How romantic. Congratulations on your first place win.

Edward Ebbs

Date: 9/27/2014 5:35:00 PM

Congrats...sensuous :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/27/2014 4:58:00 PM

oh this is imagery to die for, a stunning visual! original and beautifully sensual; I love the idea of 'dressing the twilight' (just a little apostrophe needed on 'lovers') - congrats on your 1st place win in my contest :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2014 4:55:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xxx

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/24/2014 4:38:00 PM

Oh the visual is superb

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/21/2014 2:38:00 PM

Oooh! What a beautiful romantic passionate haiku! I love it! This is certainly a winner. Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 9/21/2014 2:24:00 PM

wonderfully expressive haiku good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx