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Warm Adoration

Lover #1 warm adoration sweeter sensitive honey sharp as a stinger Lover #2 warm hibernation stays affections forever hushed sincere nectar incessant internally glorifies natural start written for Sponsor Debbie Guzzi Contest Name Love Talks

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/10/2011 11:18:00 AM

dear friend these are very good little free verses, words like "hibernation" are mind words giving to scent nor sound nor taste evoking no emotion as are the words adoration, senstive, and incessant. The words HONEY & STINGER are great..more like this/"trap/freeze a moment in the haiku line 1 subject, line 2 & 3 action// line three IS a good cutting visceral line!