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War Song

I wake up in this fine old house The quietus resides The silence, almost tangible Its pulse is almost palatable It's time to watch the rising sun Another day to feel the gulf that lies between a world undone and one I keep inside While reaching for my coffee cup, I'll hold the warmth against my breast as if it were my closest friend I step down from the old screen porch, so grateful for the dulcet sounds The morning sun is still the same as it filters through the lodge pole pines The breezes play that war song. Old heartaches still unwind The lyrics have not changed at all they ring with words I cannot bear Some stanzas seem too fathomless to shed another tear The questions they are asking, are the lyrics we have heard This song has played a thousand years, too many to recall Why must there be another war? And why so many scars? Why can't we play a song of love that treasures all mankind? Another day to feel the gulf that lies between a world undone and one I keep inside myself,…before the two collide...

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Date: 4/9/2018 11:03:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Carrie, with this marvelous poem. Well done.
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Date: 4/2/2018 6:00:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotional and wonderfully penned poem, I felt like I was with you asking the Lord why . . .
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Date: 4/1/2018 9:36:00 AM
Very well expressed. Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:59:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, a question I often ask, heartwrenching! Mick
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Date: 3/30/2018 3:34:00 PM
Such beautiful rhythms, Carrie! Iam in awe!
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Date: 3/29/2018 12:12:00 PM
A fave, Carrie! Love the shape and all! GL in contest!
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Date: 3/29/2018 9:06:00 AM
A deep reflective poem Carrie, you used the five words very well..
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Date: 3/29/2018 12:32:00 AM
Mrs Carrie,this poem has a wonderful spiritual vibe. My daddy always said if we knew all of the answers there would be no need for faith. It is how we are tested. i struggle with that "faith" thing myself. i figure, if I live the best i can according to his teachings, even if there is no heaven or hell, i will still have a fulfilling and happy life.I love the poem!
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Date: 3/28/2018 11:34:00 PM
Lovely, Carrie. Beautifully done.
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