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War Path (Faleshia Vs Esther)

Now you have some nerve making nasty Comments on people's poetry Now you all messed up bumping heads with me You really need a life I hope you can find one It's only going to take me a minute To get this task done and have fun You carry your class in a plastic bag You are no good just like a dirty rag Reading your poetry is so so sad If I was you I wouldn't ever ever brag There's no doubt in my mind Your just a waste of people's time Instead of writting poetry You have better luck committing crimes They need to send me to Iraq Because I'm ready to explode I'll do it for my country And any two bit ho ho ho I did santa a favor delivering this gift So from now on you shold hate christmas You better crawl back Into your little hole dirty mouse Next time I'm going to charge you But this one is on the house

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/7/2010 9:55:00 PM
hahaha thats soo dope!..ive been biting my tongue reading her comments on peoples poetry wanting to stab back but i held out!..now i wish i had chewed her up cause you've made it look so fun! niice job!!!
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Date: 4/4/2010 9:26:00 AM
you should be proud of writing this
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Date: 4/2/2010 1:39:00 PM
Very nice written... very polite... and you reach the point to your audience
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Date: 4/2/2010 9:09:00 AM
this was a fun read, Falesha!
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:58:00 PM
"That Esther sure has style doesn't she? to this tripe." "
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Date: 4/1/2010 11:40:00 AM
Well done Faleshia. I think you nailed her.
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Date: 4/1/2010 10:41:00 AM
wow, glad I read this, now I won't take her criticism of my poem personnally, as I now see she really is a poor sad pathetic person who hates everyone. Thanks Faleshia, I feel better now
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Date: 4/1/2010 8:41:00 AM
I agree with Amy and am really sorry Sylvia, Stephanie or whatever she wants to call herself next continues to plague the sweet and talented Soup poets. She has no friends here, but you have many! I appreciated your expression of anger, cleverly worded. Hope she gets the message! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/1/2010 8:36:00 AM
She needs to just melt back into the Earth. Crawl away like the leech she is. Parasitic psychotic.
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Date: 4/1/2010 8:28:00 AM
I love, in youe face dirty ho ho ho. I know how you feel my poem just got violated . Wait! I also violated her she keeps insulting young poets . Hey she needs go pick on her own self.
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Date: 4/1/2010 7:53:00 AM
Standing Applause! Great one Faleshia! There are many more who feel this way.
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