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War Factory

War Drawn out from Factories in Assembly line as always seen spanning all kind and all time horizons War Blueprinted consistently to win an idea or a space or anything our fancy War Somebody has a right and the supremacy to feel bored why should everybody feel we are all right we are intact

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2016 10:15:00 AM

pankaj, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Pankaj Barman
Date: 3/21/2018 7:48:00 AM

Dear Linda, I feel so honoured to receive your precious comments.Few mistakes are there.Apologies for the 3 years delay in thanking you.I read few of your abundantly expressed poetries.You are so prolific.Thanks again and again.pankaj

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 2:24:00 PM

PANKAJ, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Pankaj Barman
Date: 3/21/2018 7:50:00 AM

Dear Skatlove, thank you so much for commenting on my poem.It has few mistakes.I am so sorry in replying with extreme delay.Poets rock.Thanks again.pankaj