War

The smell of raw flesh of human emotion, Artificial thoughts are created to protect the minds, Is there anything but this war real? Let's destroy what is sheltering us all. The earth is consumed by dark smoke, Dirty humans and machines blind us all, We look over this world with a weak eye, One last breath in till it's all gone.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/16/2012 5:56:00 AM

I am stopping back today to see if you have continued to write and post new poetry Mike. I hope that you will continue with your writing. You have taken the first step~ ~to write and share. When you feel the need for inspiration read some of the other poetry here at PoetrySoup. It will help you. Love, Carol