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Wanting More of You

Where did it begin? Seeing those sad, lovely eyes saunter by my desk, or somewhere on the street. Watching you walk home, Quick paced step, tennis shoes, Wanting more of you Young heart skips a beat Weekends full of hope, seeing friends, in the scene walking the the big mall hoping we would meet. Then summer came back working out, long and lean Weekend job pumping gas making money in the heat. Party time gave chance You showed up, Drinks, dancing brought you near Meeting you a real feat. Night wore into morn Friends paired off in between We bumped in the hall Eyes looking darkly sweet Heart beats strangely fast Whispering close, smell clean Wanting more of you Take your hand, down the street Stars shining so bright As close as we've been We talk for an hour Fragrant air, flowers sweet Sun rises in sky Hair flows down like a queen Wanting more of you I crumple in defeat Stammering some words Wiggling in my jeans Wanting more of you Shuffling both my feet You turn to my face A kiss, we gently lean Wanting all of you we sit down on a seat Park bench, cold and hard Painted white and green What a perfect place To fall in love so sweet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/9/2015 8:34:00 AM
Absolutely love this poem Kimberley. You had me captured with every line. Brilliant work. Hug "B"
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Kim Shaw
Date: 3/9/2015 3:54:00 PM
Well thank you so much for the kind remarks, and stopping by to read it! I'm glad it was enjoyed :) Hugs, Kimberly xx
Date: 3/3/2015 12:42:00 AM
Touches some moving memories with your theme here Kimberly. I really enjoyed the flow of this poem. :)
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Date: 3/3/2015 6:20:00 AM
Hi David, I'm glad that it brought back some nice memories. I was remembering the seventies with this poem, but wrote from the male perspective. Hopefully I hit the mark, lol. Thank you for stopping in and leaving such a nice comment! Hugs, Kimberly

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